Kids Home Kool Recipes Essay Contest LOL Quizzlers Kids Nutrition Burn It Up Mail-Bag
STEP 3
Judging
 
Judging Criteria
All essays will be judged according to the criteria listed below. Judges will adjust their scoring based on the age and grade level of each participant.
 
  1. Understanding of the issue: An outstanding essay will demonstrate that the participant understands the topic and how it relates to his or her life and community. The essay should present a clear central argument.
  2. Originality: Participants are not expected to conduct research for this essay. However, we do encourage participants to ask community members, parents, guardians, mentors, teachers, doctors, nurses, or other health care professionals for input. We expect participants not to simply repeat the ideas they hear from other sources—essays should display the participant's ability to thoughtfully construct an argument and develop his or her own ideas.
  3. Clarity and effectiveness of style and organization: Essays should be grammatically correct and accurate in terms of spelling and word usage. Essays should present information in a clear and logical manner.
  4. Adherence to format and length rules: Essays must be no longer than 350 words for participants ages 9-12 years and no longer than 500 words for participants ages 13-16. The essays must be typed in the provided format. All essays must be submitted with a completed official entry form.
  5. The participant's name, age, grade, and region in which he or she lives must only be on the top of the COVER page on which the personal information is typed. The ESSAY pages will carry the child's unique ID number only. Please do not insert the child's name or any personal information on the essay sheets as they will be grounds for disqualification.
 
From the field of medicine
 
Contest Chairperson
 
Dr. (Mrs) Kamala Krishnaswamy, an M.D. in Internal Medicine, Former Director, National Institute of Nutrition (ICMR), Hyderabad, India has been engaged in nutrition research for more than three decades.

Her excellent contributions in the fields of clinical nutrition and cancer studies have elevated her to the ranks of some outstanding nutrition scientists of the world today. She has published around 240 original research articles in several national and international journals of repute and has edited books and contributed chapters to several books.

Under her chairmanship, the dietary guidelines for Indians was prepared which is widely circulated and used by all concerned.

In recognition of her contributions she has been bestowed with a string of awards and honors. Noteworthy among them are ‘Shakuntala Amir Chand Prize of ICMR, Dr.V.N.Patwardhan Prize in Nutritional Sciences of ICMR, Dr.Kamala Menon Medical Research Award in the Field of Internal Medicine of ICMR, Shakuntala Dasgupta Oration The Physiological society, Glaxo Oration of NAMS, Chopra oration of IPS, BC Guha Memorial Oration of Indian Academy of Sciences, Sita Mahalakshmi Memorial Oration of AP Academy of Sciences, Basant Devi Amirchand Prize of ICMR, and S.G.Srikantia Memorial Lecture Award of Nutrition Society of India, ASTC-Eminent Women Scientist Award-2004, ‘Certificate of Excellence’ awarded by Indian Medical Association on World Woman’s Day Celebrations on 12th March 2005, Dr.Rajammal.P.Devadas Annual Oration Award-2005 of Avinashilingam Deemed University, Coimbatore. She was honoured as Fellow of Indian National Science Academy, Indian Academy of Sciences, National Academy of Medical Sciences, National Academy of Sciences, National Agricultural Academy of Sciences, AP Akademi of Sciences, International Union of Nutritional Sciences and Third World Academy of Sciences.

Dr.Kamala Krishnaswamy served as an Expert in several National and International Scientific Bodies. She was a member of the Task Force of WHO and was on the Sub-Committee of International Union of Nutritional Sciences. She is on the Editorial Board of various National and International Journals. She is currently on advisory board of several Scientific Committees and industries and on the governing body of Nutrition foundation of India, New Delhi.

She is currently the President of The Nutrition Society of India, and is emeritus Medical Scientist of Indian Council of Medical Research for 3 years.
 
Dr Sunita Maheshwari is a pediatric cardiologist who did her training at Osmania Medical College and then at the Yale University School of Medicine in the U.S, where she won the ?Young Clinician Award' from the American Heart Association and the ?Best Teacher Award'. She is currently the Head of Department at Narayana Hrudayalaya in Bangalore. She also runs a trust fund called People4people that puts up playgrounds for poorer children in Karnataka. In addition she helps run a telemedicine company called Teleradiology Solutions. She is a doctor, entrepreneur and a socially active human being.
 
Dr Raju Khubchandani is a consultant pediatrician at Jaslok and Breach Candy Hospitals in Mumbai. He trained at TN Medical College and BYL Nair Hospital in Mumbai and has been a visiting fellow and professor at leading hospitals in the U.K and U.S. With his special interest in asthma, Raju is widely recognized for framing the Indian Academy of Pediatrics guidelines on Asthma management in children. He currently runs the Pediatric Rheumatology clinic at Jaslok Hospital where he has established “JAS,” an arthritis support group. Raju also serves on the board of St JUDES an NGO that provides shelter to children seeking treament for chronic diseases in Mumbai.
 
From the media
 
Mr. Pranay Gupte is a veteran international journalist, editor, author, and media consultant. He writes for Portfolio, Institutional Investor, and other major international publications such as YaleGlobal – the online magazine of the Yale University Center for the Study of Globalization - and PostGlobal, the Web site of The Washington Post.

Mr. Gupte writes exclusive reports on the Middle East, India-US relations, geopolitics and investment for the American and international business communities. He also co-authors books with major world figures and CEO's, the most recent of which, "Power and Influence: The Rules Have Changed," by Robert L. Dilenschneider, was published by McGraw-Hill internationally.

An economics and political-science graduate of Brandeis University in the United States, he also attended the Columbia University Graduate School of Journalism. Mr. Gupte was a staff reporter and a foreign correspondent at The New York Times for 15 years.

Mr. Gupte has served as a media consultant for several institutions and commissions, including the United Nations, the World Bank, and the Brundtland Commission on Environment and Sustainable Development. He was the prime force behind the establishment of a private foundation in support of the 1992 Earth Summit in Rio de Janeiro. He has moderated and appeared in panels at the World Economic Forum's Davos and regional meetings, Columbia University, the Asia Society, and other institutions. Mr. Gupte has written for many widely known magazines, including The Atlantic, Forbes, People, Reader's Digest, The New York Times Magazine, The New York Times Book Review, and the Harvard International Review.

Mr. Gupte's personal Web site is www.pranaygupte.com

 
Amrita Ganguly-Salian is the Editor of Disney Adventures Magazine (India). An alumnus of Lady Shri Ram College (Delhi) and Symbiosis Institute of Media Communications (Pune), she has researched magazine readership/publishing in the UK, US and India. Since 2000, she has headed various print assignments like The Times Journal of Photography, Femina Book of Interiors; and before joining Disney Adventures, she was the Editor for BBC Good Homes (India). She feels her various interests were fanned by the brilliant environment of her school (Sacred Heart, Jamshedpur) and so she wants to bring her professional expertise into classrooms all over the country by motivating children to find the best within themselves. As a mother and a photography teacher, she is fascinated by the worldview of children and thinks the yummiest part about her current position is that she gets to interact with kids and share the "Fun-structive" (fun + constructive) mantra of her magazine with them.
She can be contacted on: disney@infomediaindia.com, http://www.disney.in/disneyadventures/
 
From academia
 
Contest Moderator
 
Dr Amrita Dass, an eminent educationist, is the Founder-Director of ICS International which has a global presence. She pioneered the career counseling and guidance services in India.

Dr Dass is a member of the Board of Directors of some leading schools in India. She has conducted many Leadership Programmes for educationists, eduleaders and corporate executives.

Dr Dass has served as a Member of the Steering Committee on Women and Child Development of the Planning Commission of India. She has also been a speaker at many U.N. Summits, State of the World Forum, U.S.A. and Global Knowledge Partnership (GKPII) Conference, Malaysia among others.

Dr. Dass is recipient of the Lions Club Award for outstanding Social Work and the Rotary Award for Vocational Excellence. She has recently been felicitated as a “Woman Achiever” by Tata Consultancy Services (TCS).

 
Mrs. Jyotsna Brar is the Principal of Welhams Girls' School, Dehradun. She was also the Founder Principal of Rajmata Krishna Kumari Girls' Public School, Jodhpur, from 1992-99.

As a teacher of Geography, English Language and Literature for the past 25 years, she has an enviable teaching record. She believes that students deserve not ‘right answers’ but ‘real answers’.

Mrs. Brar has been a member of the Standing Committee on Examinations, Council for the Indian School Certificate Examinations, New Delhi since 2002. Her major contribution to this effort has been the rationalization of the syllabus for Environmental Education. She has also given several valuable inputs for upgrading the syllabus for English.

She has been an advisor to the Union Public Service Commission of India in 2005.

 
Mr. John Mason is a renowned educationist who has served the Indian education system for forty two years. He was the Headmaster of The Doon School and St. James School, Kolkata and also served as Vice-Principal of La Martiniere College, Kolkata.

He has the distinction of being the Principal of The Modern High School in Dubai and later Head of Asian Schools (South Asia and Middle East), Global Education Management Systems where he managed a number of schools of the group in the UAE.

His abiding interest in teacher education and development led him to set up Teachers’ Centres in Dubai and at The Doon School.

Mr. Mason is associated with a number of schools as Educational Advisor, working on curriculum development and school management. He has written several text books on English through Oxford University Press, including a popular Communicative English course.

Mr. Mason is currently a member of the Council for the Indian School Certificate Examinations. He has also been a member of the Standing Committee on Examinations at the Council for the Indian School Certificate Examinations.

 
Mrs. Devi Kar a renowned educationist is the Principal and Secretary of Modern High School for Girls, Kolkata since April 2000.

She is also the Director and Board Member of Modern Academy of Continuing Education (MACE), which is a unit of the Modern High School, conducting several teacher training programs, in conjunction with the University of Calcutta.

She has been in the field of education since 1969, as a teacher and administrator at La Martiniere for Girls, Kolkata. Owing to her pioneering work in the field of global education, the Modern High School for Girls was presented with the International School Award in 2005.

Mrs. Kar has served on the Scholarship Panel of Mahindra & Mahindra (India) as well as the Ford Foundation (USA). In addition to her various teaching and administrative responsibilities, she is also a contributing writer for the educational sections of several leading Indian newspapers and magazines, besides, authoring textbooks in history for secondary school students.

 
Mrs. Meera Isaac is the Principal of the prestigious Cathedral & John Connon School in Mumbai. She has over three decades of rich experience in the educational sector. Besides her love for English as a subject, her areas of interest include elocution, creative writing debating and dramatics.

An eminent educationist and winner of the National Award for Teachers, Mrs. Isaacs also has the distinction of being a Member of the Standing Committee on Examination and also that of the Executive Committee of the Council for the Indian School Certificate Examinations.

Mrs. Isaacs credo as an educationist is to put the child as the focus of all educational activities so that he/she may grow into an assured and confident person who is able to evolve strategies and skills to deal with the ever changing environment. If he/she is able to do this, it naturally follows that the joy of life will be his/hers.

 
Ms. Leena Aparajit is Advisor and Consultant to The Scindia School, Gwalior. She began her career as a corporate executive but gave it up as she found her métier in education. For a number of years she taught Physics, Math and English to students of the Secondary and Senior Secondary School at St Thomas’ Dehradun and Sacred Heart School, Dalhousie.

Ms. Aparajit has the distinction of being the founding Head of the Senior School of The Shri Ram School, Gurgaon, which in a short span of a time acquired a formidable reputation, as a leader in educational thought.

Ms. Aparajit has also worked as the Education Director of Scholars International Group in Dubai. Her mandate was to begin from ground zero and set up an A level British curriculum school in the UAE.

Her passion in life is education. She continues to work in this area sharing the vast competencies that she has acquired over the years.

 
Mrs. Farida Abraham is the Principal of La Martiniere Girls College, Lucknow, India.

She has been instrumental in introducing new subjects such as Environmental Science and Computer Applications. Mrs. Abraham is also very keen that the children develop strong social and community values and much work has been done to this end by the school in the fields of Environment and Wildlife Conservation.

La Martiniere College also has a very active Social Work Unit - Gandhi Corner, which has been equally involved in community building and social causes.

 

Ms. Rekha Krishnan is the Head of Vasant Valley Senior School, New Delhi. She is an eminent educationist with a masters degree in History and the Science of Education.

An able administrator, she has had the opportunity of teaching as well as managing school affairs in various capacities over the last two decades in some of the finest educational institutions of the country like Modern High School, Kolkatta and La Martiniere Boys School, Kolkatta.

School-Leadership has always been close to Ms. Krishnan's heart. She has at all times striven to build and provide an effective leadership framework for holistic improvement of the school ecosystem and student outcome. Besides teaching History, her mission in life is to ensure that she along with her team of teachers help in creating an environment where each child learns and reaches his/her zone of proximal development.

 
Mrs. Mary Roy, Founder-Principal, Pallikoodam School, Kottayam

Mrs. Mary Roy, an eminent educator and women's rights activist, is the Founder-Principal of the Pallikoodam School (formerly Corpus Christi High School) at Kottayam.

Mrs. Roy’s objective for setting up the school was to make learning a fun process and to free the students from the bondage of the exam system. Mrs. Roy is a firm believer that the learning ability of a child is awakened in his or her own language first, which leads to improved grasping power. According to her, in the first four years a child should use the mother tongue as the language of play, study and communication.

Under the inspirational leadership of Mrs. Roy, the school has partnered with various organizations including Greenpeace, EXNORA, and several NGOs for various projects. The school has also been involved in relief efforts in the wake of natural disasters and calamities.The school has been a subject of a documentary by Doordarshan entitled "Mary Roy and Corpus Christi". In 2006, the school won the 'TCS IT Wiz trophy'.